Write a poem in one sentence with simple syntax and a
minimum of rhetorical flourish. Add a
parenthetical phrase and an independent clause utilizing semi-colons or
em-dashes. Keep the poem going: employ
comma splices to extend your narrative, description or rhythm. Trust the sentence. These were the instructions for yesterday’s
discussion at Alan Basting’s Creative Writing Workshop held at the LAC
Community Center and Gallery. Marvin,
Ken, Kathleen, Anita, Barb and Jean enjoyed a morning taking turns listening to
each others’ efforts at poetry, commenting and discussing the content and
mechanics.
Ken was the first to read his poem about wind chimes and
their “murderous cacophony”. Apparently
he or someone he knows has an aversion to their “dingle dangle” sounds! Jean read her poem about finding her muse and
Marvin read his about growing old.
Everyone had positive and constructive comments for each other. Marvin commented that “poems are a response
to an experience – if done honestly—it’s a good poem.” Alan, a retired university professor of
writing headed up the discussions,
pointing out technical details such as how shorter lines in a poem
demand attention, build tension and add surprises. Unpredictability is fun for a reader. Longer lines of poetry can be more
melodic. His newest book of poetry,
Nothing Very Sudden Happens Here, was available for purchase at the
workshop. Two more sessions remain, free
of charge, but rsvps are appreciated.
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